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Friday, October 21, 2022

Screenplay Format #25 - SYNOPSIS


 
The Synopsis is a brief description of the story.
Which is designed to give a quick overview of what it is about, 
to anyone that you approach, or involve, in the making of the film etc,

 
It is probably best to use only one page, as this will be easy to read.
 
eg.











 
 







































To make the Synopsis, follow these steps –
 
 
3.  SYNOPSIS   
 
-  OPEN    the File    0-1-NAME-SYNOPSIS
-  I have used a    HEADING    with    NO NUMBER
              This is because this File is also, more of a conversational type
              in the group of Files that form an Overview of the Screenplay,
              before the    Script.
 
eg.
__________________________________________________________________________
 
 
                                                                                          Khaki Town – White Draft – 18 Nov 2019         
 
SYNOPSIS
 
 
__________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
            -  On the    3rd LINE    UNDER    the    HEADING,
                TYPE IN    the words describing the Original Work -
 
                        NAME OF STORY    by    AUTHOR / PLAYWRIGHT

            If it is your Original Work, then that is all that is needed.
 
            If it is an adaption of someone else’s Original Work –
            -  On the    NEXT LINE,
               TYPE IN    the words –
                       
                        Adapted Screenplay / Script    by    Your Name   
 
eg.
__________________________________________________________________________
 
 
KHAKI TOWN    by    JUDY NUNN
Adapted Screenplay    by    Katherine Stuart
 
__________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
DESCRIPTION OF STORY
 
            -  PRESS ENTER    6    TIMES
               Making    5    SPACE LINES
            -  TYPE IN    the    SHORT DESCRIPTION OF THE STORY
 
eg.
__________________________________________________________________________
 
 
The President of the United States, Lyndon Baines Johnson (LBJ), is reflecting on past events, in the Oval Office (The White House, Washington DC). He is about to sign the final version of the Civil Rights Act of 1964, inviting Robert Kennedy to be present, as it will become law on the morrow.
 
This prompts him to relate to Robert, an event that he was involved in during WW2.
 
US troops were offered to Australia to help with the war effort, and Negroes were included.
Australia, however, had then and now (1964), their White Australia Policy and didn’t want the Negroes. However, President Franklin D. Roosevelt said,

“We said if no black troops, then no US troops! Period!”
 
Set in the first half of 1942, against the backdrop of the imminent Japanese invasion of Australia, the following story, based on fact, traces the build-up and explosive conclusions to the presence of Negroes in Townsville, Qld. Involving in particular, a group of Company A & C soldiers of the 96th Battalion, US Army Corps of Engineers, who led a mutiny against their white US officers.
 
__________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
IMPORTANT POINTS
 
I have also included an important point in relation to this particular story,
which I’ve added below, but separate to, the description.
 
            If you have any relevant Important Points –
            -  PRESS ENTER    8    TIMES
  This gives    7    SPACE LINES
            -  TYPE IN    the    IMPORTANT POINT / S
 
eg.
__________________________________________________________________________
 
 
At the time, the incidents were buried, and have only come to light recently through the research activities of a James Cook University’s (Townsville) historian, Mr Ray Holyoak (2012).
 
__________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
This is all that I have included in the File      0-1-NAME-SYNOPSIS
 
 
 
 
© Katherine Stuart 2022
Dochas Books Film

Wednesday, October 12, 2022

Screenplay Format # 24 - GENERAL

 
So, recapping –
 
These are all the Files in the Screenplay –
 
   0-0.  Cover Letter
             0-1.  Synopsis
             0-2.  General
             0-3.  Title Page
             0-4.  Script
             1.  Scene Tags
             2.  Scenes
             3.  Scenes / Locations
             4.  Locations / Scenes
             5.  Locations
             6.  Map of Locations
             7.  Montages
             8.  Lifts
             9.  Characters
            10.  Scene Timeline
            11.  Partial WW2 Timeline
 
 
The Files –
 
            0-3.  Title Page
                        To
            11.  Partial WW2 Timeline
 
have been outlined in the previous blog posts.
 
 
Now it is time to wrap up the whole Screenplay.
 
 
 
1.  THE END

In most of the Files, especially the Script and those with long lists,
I have entered in, the words –
 
                        THE END
 
a    Few Lines Down     from    The End of the List, etc.,
to make clear that there is no more material to work on.
So, avoiding any confusion or delay in working with such a large amount of informatiion.
 
 
 
2.  THE GENERAL FILE   
 
-  OPEN    the File    0-2-NAME-GENERAL
-  I have used a    HEADING    with    NO NUMBER
             This is because this File is more of a conversational type,
             in the group of Files that form an Overview of the Screenplay,
             before the    Script.
 
eg.
________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
                                                                                  Khaki Town – White Draft – 18 Nov 2019        
 
                GENERAL
 
 
________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
TIMELINE ETC.
 
If applicable,
          -  On the    3rd LINE    UNDER    the    HEADING,
             TYPE IN    the word,    TIMELINE,    as a    SUB-HEADING
          -  Under this,
   TYPE IN    a short explanation of your perspective of the Screenplay Timeline
 
eg.
________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
                TIMELINE
                Many times, dates and people’s ages in this screenplay are estimates only, to give                    a sense of flow.
 
___________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
This would also be a useful place to state any other perspectives taken in the Screenplay,
in separate paragraphs.
 
For example,
            -  If it is a Fictitious Story,
               That all people and events represented in the story are fictitious,
               and in no way represent any real person or event / s.
 
 
LENGTH OF SCRIPT
 
            -  PRESS ENTER    4    TIMES,
               To make    3    SPACE LINES
            -  TYPE IN –
-  the words,    LENGTH OF SCRIPT
-  the    TOTAL NUMBER OF SCRIPT PAGES
              
 
eg.
________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
              
                LENGTH OF SCRIPT      -      486  pages
 
__________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
This is for a handy reference.
 
 
 
LENGTH OF FILM
 
I have made an estimate of the Length of the Film, to give an idea of what sort of Film, KHAKI TOWN, is. This also gives an idea of How Much Work will be involved in Making the Film.
 
eg.
________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
                LENGTH OF FILM
                A mathematical estimate.
 
                Scene Length           No.              Length per scene         Total
 
                S                      165              15 sec max                     41 min 15 sec
 
                M                     145              30 sec max                     72 min 30 sec
 
                L                      165              30 sec min                      82 min 30 sec,  +
                                                 ____                                                   ____________________
                                                                                                           
                                                  470                                                     196 min 15 sec,  +
                                                 ____                                                    
                                                                                                             3 hours 16 min 15 sec,  +
                                                                                                             ___________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
So, you can see that I have used the Scene Lengths,
            S,    M    &    L
 
Which I estimated in the File –
            2-KHAKI TOWN-scenes
 
eg.
___________________________________________________________________
 
 
 

                                                                                                                                                                                             
                                    2.  SCENES     
                                                                                                                       Long          Book      Script
                                                                                                                       Medium     Page       Page
                                                                                                                       Short                        
                 
                                1           1964              
                                    1      Afternoon                                                   L                1            1      
           - Bobby shakes hands with LBJ                                               
                                                     1      1961 – 63, Flashback,                        S                 2            2 
                                                              Day or night, A couple                                           
                                                              of years earlier
                                                              - Bobby & Jack having a 
                                                              Scotch                                          
                                    1       cont’d                                                                           2            2
                                                      - The Civil Rights Act
                                                      Bundy Rum and
                                                      LBJ’s war time mission                                                                  
                                                      2      1961 – 63, Flashback,                       M               4             4
                                                              Day or night,
                                                              A couple of years earlier
                                      - Jack says that it was a beat-up
__________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
Just recapping, from the previous blog post, “Screenplay Format  #10 – Scene List” -
 
___________________________________________________________________________________
 
LENGTH OF SCENE
 
I have estimated the length of each
Scene / Scene Sub-Section / Scene Sub-Sub-Section, as –
 
S          -           SMALL             15 seconds or less
 
M         -           MEDIUM          15 -30 seconds
 
L          -           LARGE             30 seconds or more
 
 
 
I did this by using a stop watch to time each
Scene / Scene Sub-Section / Scene Sub-Sub-Section
as I read it out to myself,
approximating the pace of the real action.
 
This, I used to estimate the Total Length of Running Time of the Film.
___________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
To Make the Length of Film Table (above) –
 
-  IN THE FILE      2-NAME-SCENES
   GO DOWN THE LIST AND (USING OTHER MEANS)
            -  ADD UP HOW MANY SCENES ARE IN EACH SCENE LENGTH CATEGORY
                        -  S     (SMALL)                No.
                        -  M    (MEDIUM)              No.
                        -  L     (LARGE)                No.
            -  MULTIPY EACH No. by their respective individual SIZE
                        -  S No.   x  15 sec            =    Total Time Length for Small Scenes etc.
                        -  M No.  x  30  sec           =    Total Time Length for Medium Scenes etc.
                        -  L  No.  x  30  sec (+)      =    Total Time Length (+ extra) for Large Scenes etc.
            -  ADD UP EACH    of the    3    Total Time Lengths            =    Total Time Length (+ extra)
                                                                                                     for the Film
-  IN THE FILE      0-2-NAME-GENERAL
            -  CONSTRUCT THE TABLE (AS ABOVE)
            -  TYPE IN THE RELEVANT INFORMATION
 
 
Hopefully, this gives a working estimate of how long the Film would end up running for.
 
 
 
This is all that I have included in the File      0-2-NAME-GENERAL
 
 
 
 
© Katherine Stuart 2022
Dochas Books Film