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Friday, August 12, 2022

Screenplay Format #20 - Lifts


A    Lift    is what I have called, a piece of already written    Script    which is    “Lifted”    
from the Script and inserted as a    Flashback    later in the    Script.
 
Essentially, from a filming point of view, the    Sequence    is Firstly Filmed at some stage,
then when    Editing,    it is    “Lifted”,    that is,    Copied    and    Inserted    into the    
Second Position, which is the    Flashback Position.
 
There were several    Lifts    in the Adapted Screenplay of KHAKI TOWN,
which I have compiled into a    List,    for easy access –
 
 
eg.       8-KHAKI TOWN-LIFTS
                        ___________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
                                                                            Khaki Town – White Draft – 18 Nov 2019        
 
8.  LIFTS
 
 
    From Sc.     Page          To Sc.         Page
 
    194.6            403            1.1.4.1        11                       Lyndon Baines Johnson takes his 
                                                                                         first slug of Bundy Rum
 
    202.1            473            1.1.4.2        11                       Val gives Lyndon Baines Johnson 
                                                                                         an unopened bottle of Bundy 
                                                                                         Rum to keep as a memento
 
    7.1                 25              9.2.1          31                       “Women are working all sorts of
                                                                                         jobs these days.”
 
    etc.                                                                                                                                          
                                                                                                                                                                                                                      __________________________________________________________________________________  
 
 
 
 
To make up this    List,    follow these steps –
 
 
OPEN    the    Files –    
 
8-NAME-LIFTS
0-4-NAME-Script
1-NAME-Scene Tags
2-NAME-Scenes
 
In    8-NAME-LIFTS
            -  GO TO    the    3rd    Line    below    the    Heading
            -  TYPE IN    a    Line    of    Sub-Headings, such –
 
 
    From Sc.      Page          To Sc.        Page
 
 
               “Page”    here, refers to    Screenplay Page Number

-  DISPLAY
                        1-NAME-Scene Tags
                        2-NAME-Scenes
   Side by side, using the SPLIT SCREEN Technique
                        (Described in - Screenplay Format  #12 – Locations-Scenes List - Part 1)
 
In    1-NAME-Scene Tags
            -  GO DOWN    the    List    chronologically,
               looking for each    FLASHBACK    in turn
 
At the     Same Time -
In    2-NAME-Scenes
            -  CHECK    what each    FLASHBACK    is,
               and    Determine    from    Memory    if that    FLASHBACK    was    LIFTED
               from    Previous Filming
 
 
eg.       1-KHAKI TOWN-Scene Tags
            2-KHAKI TOWN-Scenes
                  _________________________________________________________________________________________________________
 
                              9        .2.1  [FLASHBACK – 2 YEARS EARLIER] – LATE MAY 1940                  41         3                                                                           [INT. THE FRANCIS HOME – DAY or NIGHT]
 
            .2.1  [FLASHBACK – END] – BACK TO END MAR 1942
     
__________________________________________________________________________________
 
                               9          2         1         1940, Late May, Flashback, Day or night,                    S         41         31
                                     2 years earlier
                                     - Betty saying women work all sorts of jobs                      
 
                      ___________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
 
MEMORY
If you have a good memory for your Scenes, then this should not be too much of a problem.
If you don’t, then when you write your Script, it would be a good idea to –
 -  MARK    the    Flashbacks    that you know are    Lifts,    as you go along
-  TYPE IN    a note    underneath them,
    in both the    Scene Tag List    and the    Scene List
    as to what Scene and what Page Number they come from
 
 
 
 
FORMALISE THE NOTES
 
Whether you have a good memory or not,
the    Notes    in the    Scene Tag List    and the    Scene List,    should be    Formalised,    such –
 
 
eg.       1-KHAKI TOWN-Scene Tags
            2-KHAKI TOWN-Scenes  
__________________________________________________________________
 
                                9         .2.1  [FLASHBACK – 2 YEARS EARLIER] – LATE MAY 1940                41         3
                                           [INT. THE FRANCIS HOME – DAY or NIGHT]
                          Lifted from    Sc.  7.1    p.  25 

              .2.1  [FLASHBACK – END] – BACK TO END MAR 1942
 
                _______________________________________________________________________________________
 
                                9          2          1          1940, Late May, Flashback, Day or night,                   S         41         31
                                        2 years earlier
                                        - Betty saying women work all sorts of jobs                      
                                        Lifted from    Sc.  7.1    p.  25 
 
                _______________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
 
FILLING IN THE LIFTS LIST
 
-  DISPLAY
                        8-NAME-LIFTS
                        2-NAME-Scenes
   Side by side, using the SPLIT SCREEN Technique
                        (Described in - Screenplay Format  #12 – Locations-Scenes List - Part 1)
 
In    2-NAME-Scenes
            -  COPY    the    Relevant INFORMATION    from each    LIFT
               Down the    List    chronologically,    in turn
 
At the same time –
In    8-NAME-LIFTS
            -  PASTE    the    INFORMATION    Under    the Relevant Heading


eg.       2-KHAKI TOWN-Scenes
___________________________________________________________________________________

                                                            1          1          4          1942, Jun, Flashback, 22 years earlier
                                                                                                1          Fri 6 Jun, Afternoon                                       S           10          11
                                                                                                            - Lyndon Baines Johnson has his first
                                                                                                            slug of Bundy Rum
                                                  Lifted from    Sc.  194.6    p.  403

                               194       6         Cut to                                                                                      L           328       403

                          - Johnson tries Bundy rum, Val explains about her

                          involvement with the club

            
___________________________________________________________________________________



eg.       8-KHAKI TOWN-LIFTS
                       ___________________________________________________________________________________
              
                From Sc.     Page           To Sc.          Page
 
                194.6           403              1.1.4.1         11                       Lyndon Baines Johnson takes 
                                                                                                       his first slug of Bundy Rum

                ______________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
 
FOLLOW THROUGH
 
The    NOTES    need to be    FOLLOWED THROUGH,    in each    FOLLOWING RELEVANT LIST –
 
 
3-NAME-Scenes-Locations
 
eg.                                                                                                                                                                    ____________________________________________________________

      7.1       The Francis Home (INT. DAY or NIGHT, LATER IN THE YEAR)          36         25
                  - 1940, Late May
         
                     9.2.1       The Francis Home (INT. DAY or NIGHT, 2 YEARS EARLIER)              41         31
                                    – 1940, Late May                                             
                                    Lifted from    Sc.  7.1    p.  25 
  
                _______________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
4-NAME-Locations-Scenes
 
eg.
                _______________________________________________________________________________________
 
                   16.  The Francis Home
                         7.1       The Francis Home (INT. DAY or NIGHT, LATER IN THE YEAR)          36         25
                                     - 1940, Late May 
                                           
                      9.2.1       The Francis Home (INT. DAY or NIGHT, 2 YEARS EARLIER)              41         31
                                      – 1940, Late May                                 
                    Lifted from    Sc.  7.1    p.  25

             ________________________________________________________________________________________    
 
 
 
 
© Katherine Stuart 2022
Dochas Books Film

Friday, August 5, 2022

Screenplay Format #19 - Montages


Montages are short film sequences that are edited together to make a longer sequence, usually following a story thread 
(idea / concept).
 
In the Screenplay for KHAKI TOWN, there are 2 types of Montages –
            -  BLACK & WHITE        -  Newsreels
            -  COLOUR                    -  Information concerning Large Scale Civilian Events,
                                                      which is condensed
                                                   -  Visual and Audible explanations of Personal Experiences
 
For ease of access to these particular types of sequences, I found it useful to make a List.
 
 
So,       To Set Up the File -       7-NAME-MONTAGES
 
            -  OPEN    the File    1-NAME-Scene Tags
  -  OPEN    the File    7-NAME-MONTAGES
  -  Display the 2 Files side by side, using the SPLIT SCREEN Technique,    described in -
                        Screenplay Format  #12 – Locations-Scenes List - Part 1
 
             -  GO DOWN    the    SCENE TAG LIST    chronologically
                        -  SELECT & COPY    all the    SCENE TAGS   with all their information,
       that are    Montages
                           as    ONE    GROUP
                           using the    SELECT – TECHNIQUES,    outlined in –
                                    Screenplay Format  #12 – Locations-Scenes List – Part 1
 
            If you need to do this in a number of groups,
            the    CLIPBOARD    may need to be    OPEN    to be able to carry more than    1    item.
 
            To Open the Clipboard –
            In the    FILE    1-NAME-Scene Tags
            In the    HOME TAB RIBBON
                        -  GO TO    the    Clipboard Section













 
                        -  LEFT CLICK    on the    SMALL ARROW BOX    in the     Bottom Right Corner
                           The    CLIPBOARD   will    EXPAND OUT   along the    LEFT    of the    SCREEN
 
            While the    CLIPBOARD    is    EXPANDED,   
            MULTIPLE ITEMS    can be    COPIED
 
            On my computer, it’s    24.
 
                        -  PASTE    the    GROUP / S    to the File      7-NAME-MONTAGES
                           in    CHRONOLOGICAL ORDER
                        -  PLACE    a    SPACE LINE    between each    SCENE TAG
 
eg.                                                                                                                                                                                                _____________________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
                                                                                                                                                                 Khaki Town – White Draft – 18 Nov 2019
 
        7.  MONTAGES
                                                                                                                                                                                       Book                 Screen
                                                                                                                                                                                       Page                 Play                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Page
 
                                    8         [NEWSREEL MONTAGE OF CUTAWAYS] – END MAR 1942                                        40                    29            
                                    [INT. or EXT. BEYOND NTH OF AUS, TOWNSVILLE
             – DAY &/or NIGHT]
 
            [INT. or EXT. AUS, TOWNSVILLE – DAY &/or NIGHT]

        etc.
 
                               _____________________________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
 
SECTIONS
 
If you need to Group the Montages into different Sections –
            -  SELECT, CUT & PASTE    them into these    SECTIONS
               keeping them in    CHRONOLOGICAL ORDER
               within    EACH SECTION
            -  TYPE IN    a    HEADING    for each    SECTION
 
eg.                     ____________________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
                                                                                                                              Khaki Town – White Draft – 18 Nov 2019

        7.  MONTAGES
                                                                                                                                                                                       Book               Screen
                                                                                                                                                                                       Page                Play
                                                                                                                                                                                                               Page
                                     BLACK & WHITE

                                   8           [NEWSREEL MONTAGE OF CUTAWAYS] – END MAR 1942                                      40                    29
                                                [INT. or EXT. BEYOND NTH OF AUS, TOWNSVILLE
                                     – DAY &/or NIGHT]
 
                                 50           [NEWSREEL MONTAGE OF CUTAWAYS – A FEW DAYS LATER]                              147                  148
                              – THE FIRST DAYS OF MAY 1942
                                                [EXT. THE CORAL SEA – DAY &/or NIGHT]
 
           etc.
 
 

           COLOUR
 
                                  11           [MONTAGE OF CUTAWAYS] – BEG APR 1942                                                             48                    36
              [INT. or EXT. AUS, TOWNSVILLE – DAY &/or NIGHT]
 
        .1  [MONTAGE OF CUTAWAYS]                                                                                      74                    61
              [INT. &/or EXT. TOWNSVILLE – DAY &/or NIGHT]
 
         etc.
 
                             _____________________________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
 
NEWSREELS
 
There are various places in the Screenplay of KHAKI TOWN which lend themselves to being explained by a Newsreel.
 
Newsreels were a News “vehicle” during World War Two.
The other one, being the Newspaper.
 
Newsreels were short documentary films shown in the Cinema, when people went to see a Movie.
They reported on the news of the day, including recent events overseas in the War, and were a strong influence on the Civilian population.
 
Having a look at some archive Newsreels on the internet, I can see that there are two distinctly different styles between those done by Australian filmmakers, and those done by American filmmakers. I have included each style where appropriate, and indicated this under each of their respective Scene Tags –
 
eg.
                      ___________________________________________________________________________________________
                             
                                    8          [NEWSREEL MONTAGE OF CUTAWAYS] – END MAR 1942                                        40                    29
              [EXT. BEYOND NTH OF AUS, TOWNSVILLE – DAY &/or NIGHT]
                         - Australian style, Australian POV
 
 
 
                                 207         [NEWSREEL MONTAGE] – MON 16 JUN 1942                                                              372                  48
                                     [EXT. AUSTRALIA & NEW GUINEA – DAY &/or NIGHT]
                          - American style, American POV
 
                            _____________________________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
 
The Newsreels that I wrote into the Screenplay, cover large scale perspectives on Internal Australian Military Events, as well as Overseas Military Events.
 
The Newsreels that I researched, were in the main filmed in Black and White, so I have opted to have the Screenplay Newsreels Black and White also.
 
 
eg.  Excerpts from the File    2-KHAKI TOWN-Scenes
                        __________________________________________________________________________________________
                                 
                                    8          1942, End Mar, Newsreel Montage of Cutaways, Day                            S                      40                    29
                                                and/or night
                                                – Japanese advancing, many civilians have fled,    
                                                Townsville a garrison town
     
                                  50           1942, The first days of May,                                                                    S, M                 147                 148
                               Newsreel Montage of Cutaways, Day and/or night,
                               A few days later                                 
               - Japanese and Allied Forces are building towards
               The Battle of the Coral Sea
 
                            _____________________________________________________________________________________________________

 
 
 
LARGE SCALE CIVILIAN EVENTS
 
There are several places in the Screenplay of KHAKI TOWN, where large scale Internal Australian Events, need to be explained from a Civilian Point of View.
 
Here, I’ve written them in as Montages, to condense the large amount of information into something succinct and easy to understand.
 
I’ve written them in as Colour, to give them a more relatable quality to the average person.
 
 
eg.  Excerpt from the File    2-KHAKI TOWN-Scenes 
                        _________________________________________________________________________________________
 
 23         Flashback
                                                1        1941, Mid Dec, Montage of Cutaways,                                            S,M                74                     61
                        Day and/or night, 2 years later                  
                        – The army arrives
 
                            ____________________________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
 
EXPLANATIONS OF PERSONAL EXPERIENCES
 
There are also several places, where complicated Personal Experiences need to be explained succinctly from a Personal Point of ‘View. These were in both the Military and Civilian areas.
 
I’ve also written them in as Colour, to make them personally relatable.
 
 
eg.  Excerpts from the File    2-KHAKI TOWN-Scenes
                        __________________________________________________________________________________________
 
 34        
               1
                       1
                               2           1942, Early Mar - Early Apr, Montage of                   S                      101                  92
          Flashbacks , Day, Over the past month
                                            - People asking Amelia about Martin
           
                                     60         1942, Wed 7 May, Montage of Cutaways, Day, That day                      S, M                 161                  161
                - The US Military bans the 96th from town
 
                            ____________________________________________________________________________________________________
 
 
 
 
© Katherine Stuart 2022
Dochas Books Film